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Dear Watchers & Friends,
I have just created an new sister account under the name AliceGrain
It is under construction as of now so there is not much on it yet. This account is mainly for literature purposes. Another reason I created this account is because I want to start. I really don't like the reputation I built up as QueenMariposa, especially with that weird Wubbzy thing that was going on. Ugh. (What was I thinking then?) So now I'll probably be spending most of my time on the sister account. When I finish setting it up this account will be deemed closed. I won't deactivate it, since some people still like the stuff there.
P.S. VERY IMPORTANT
The Wow Wow Wubbzy Fan Club will be deactivated due to lack of interest. If anyone happens to want to take ownership of this group please message me here or my sister account within the next 7 Days.
I have just created an new sister account under the name AliceGrain
It is under construction as of now so there is not much on it yet. This account is mainly for literature purposes. Another reason I created this account is because I want to start. I really don't like the reputation I built up as QueenMariposa, especially with that weird Wubbzy thing that was going on. Ugh. (What was I thinking then?) So now I'll probably be spending most of my time on the sister account. When I finish setting it up this account will be deemed closed. I won't deactivate it, since some people still like the stuff there.P.S. VERY IMPORTANT
The Wow Wow Wubbzy Fan Club will be deactivated due to lack of interest. If anyone happens to want to take ownership of this group please message me here or my sister account within the next 7 Days.
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The long anticipated Sonic game has finally came out (everywhere but north America). But unfortunately I live in the US and I don't own a WiiU so I can only talk about the cutscenes off of some random guy's playthrough m.youtube.com/user/frokenok3 Hooray! We finally get to find out about the Deadly Sins (oops, 'six') that Sega's been shoving down our throats. They're so cool looking and mysterious. I wonder what the Zeti are; where they come from and what's their purpose? I guess we'll find out soon enough.
The story of the game is Sonic and Tails are lured to Lost Hex by Eggman and he has an evil machine he uses to steal some of Earth energy to power his robots. The six Zeti he enslaved are released when Sonic kicks his Magic Spongebob Conch away and it's never seen again nor do any know where it came from. The Zeti decide to hijack Eggmans energy stealing machine and steal ALL of Earth energy to fuel themselves. Causing Amy and Knuckles to slowly die. Sonic and Tails have to team up with Eggman' cause he's the only one (supposedly) who can stop the machine. And of course they argue like rebellious teenagers do with their uptight parents. 'Cause this is the first time they worked together for the world's benefit *cough Adventure 2 & Heroes cough*. In the end Sonic kills the Deadly Six, giving Eggman time to sneak off and use the stolen energy to power his Nega Wisp Death Egg Robot (Rehashing FTW!). Sonic obviously defeats Eggman and the world is saved.
The story sucks big time. Remember those questions I and many others had about the Deadly Six? They're never answered. That made me so upset. Why would they bring up these mystery characters just to throw them away? They have no motivation at all, just silly stereotypes (skilled old man, fashionista, fat stupid dude, emo, mentally insane, and cruel leader dude). In the end they just die. They don't say any final goodbyes, nor does anyone ever speak of them again. Fans can do better than that in no time. Read this: The Deadly Six are the last of their kind and they want to strengthen themselves with Earth energy so that they'll live longer and prevent the extinction of the Zeti. Pretty simple, but no they're just evil' cause they were just in the mood. Instead they had to come up with a half assed reason to make Eggman the final boss and make a bunch of jokes. Also the wisps are back! Why? 'Cause fuck you that's why! They're existence on Lost Hex is never explained either. We don't even see Yacker return.
The dialog is also pretty random. Sonic would be like: "We got to work together to save the world... Ima take a shower after all this." Huh? Was I supposed to laugh here, I don't get it. Also The writers try to be a little edgy by mentioning death and torture, but it doesn't really fit since the rest of the dialog is cheesy. A hate how Sonic and Tails are shocked to hear Eggman giving the Deadly Six death threats when he threatened to turn Tails into mincemeat in SA1. Inconsistency at its best folks!
There are a few good things about the story. The some of the jokes are kinda funny, Eggman is mature and taken seriously, and Amy isn't a crazy psycho. Besides the recycled footage of the energy sucking machine, the cutscenes are amazing to look at. Also the voice acting is good. I loved the tone in Sonic's voice when he thought all his friends maybe dead.
The main reason this story is terrible is the lack of explanation, which is also one of the main reasons Sonic 06 had a bad story. The magic Spongebob conch shell isn't explained, the Zeti aren't explained, Lost Hex isn't explained, the wisps aren't explained, nothing is explained. Also inconsistency is a major problem. The dialog can be random and the story doesn't match up with the previous games. It had so , uch potential to be next greatest Sonic story after SA2. Those idiot writers from Happy Tree Friends still don't know what the hell they're doing and need to be replaced. All they do is write jokes when they should be focusing on character development. Sega should have used better writers, like Pendleton Ward, JC Quintel, or the writers of the adventure games and 06 (06?! Le gasp!) since they actually take the time to develop the new characters amd be comical at the same time.
Yeeesh! This was a pretty long rant/review. Sorry about that. I just needed to get this off my chest. I can't tell my friends and family at home since they'll assume I have a mental disorder for liking Sonic related stuff even though the newer games were meant to appeal to old timers (80s kids). Talk to you guys later.
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It's been a while, hasn't it?
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Hello fellow watchers. It's been a long time since I've posted anything on here and you probably all think I was dead or something. I've actually been drawing a lot lately and even making a new story, but because of art thieves I don't know if I should. I could have something really great and never know until some lazy rich company steals it and makes a profit off of it. Also I got bored with this site and none of my friends on here are never on or on hiatus. I've watched all episodes of King of the Hill, That '70s show, Both Fullmetal Alchemists, Squid Girl, Angel Beats, Clannad, Baka and Test, Sword Art Online, The World God Only Knows, This Ugly Yet Beautiful World, Soul Eater, Death Note, Rocko's Modern Life, and others ,but I can't remember at the moment.
About my new story, all I'm gonna say is that it's about an angel and a demon with romance elements. I've also rewritten Butterfly Rose where it takes the perspective of Tamika Raynes. I renamed Super Rainbow Girls Prism Seven7 to make it sound less kiddy. I'm not sure about what I'll do about Strawberra and Cocoa and Friends.
For all my watchers that favor my Wubbzy related stuff, I'm not doing that anymore. I've pretty much lost interest in it, but don't fret I will keep the club open for you all. I did create an interesting new story for it as well. It had mad scientists, magicians, rivals, romance, death, and all that stuff. Wubbzy was supposed to be a reincarnation of a powerful magician named Aurum who was the only hope in saving Wuzzleburg from a mad scientist and his evil elixir. Sounds ridiculous, right? And there was so much other crap going on as well and it would have been to complicated for the reader. Also a story based on a little kids show was a dumb idea and it barely followed its original source. I rewrote the story so that the Wubbzy characters would be replaced by my own characters and it turned into that new story I was mentioning earlier.
About my new story, all I'm gonna say is that it's about an angel and a demon with romance elements. I've also rewritten Butterfly Rose where it takes the perspective of Tamika Raynes. I renamed Super Rainbow Girls Prism Seven7 to make it sound less kiddy. I'm not sure about what I'll do about Strawberra and Cocoa and Friends.
For all my watchers that favor my Wubbzy related stuff, I'm not doing that anymore. I've pretty much lost interest in it, but don't fret I will keep the club open for you all. I did create an interesting new story for it as well. It had mad scientists, magicians, rivals, romance, death, and all that stuff. Wubbzy was supposed to be a reincarnation of a powerful magician named Aurum who was the only hope in saving Wuzzleburg from a mad scientist and his evil elixir. Sounds ridiculous, right? And there was so much other crap going on as well and it would have been to complicated for the reader. Also a story based on a little kids show was a dumb idea and it barely followed its original source. I rewrote the story so that the Wubbzy characters would be replaced by my own characters and it turned into that new story I was mentioning earlier.
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Free Membership Day!!!
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I'm So Proud!!!
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I never said anything about this but before school started they gave me my schedule and it had Weight Training instead of Lifetime Rec. and I was gonna do something about it but my older sister was like " Mr. A teaches that! Class he's cool don't switch classes!" So I took her advice. Then on the 1st day of school i went in the weight room and I WAS THE ONLY GIRL THERE!! And even worse it was too late for me to switch out, so i was stuck liftin' weights for the rest of the semester. The class was actually pretty easy. I really like how on 3 days out of the week we took break days so i was able to go to the library and do my homework. Last Friday was the last say of gym before midterms and Mr.A said "Thanks for stickin' to the class" and i though "wow! i'm so proud!"
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